my 2cents of feedback: although this update had quite a lot of action, which is good. The acts felt a bit random and rushed. like a lack of flow and purpose to the MC's actions and overarching story. would be nice to incorporate a bit more of that in future updates. :)

XY Visual Novels343 days ago

Yes, agreed. It was a bit rushed as we're struggling for time at the moment. We'll try to incorporate a bit more story and build-up in future. This may mean updates taking a bit longer but we'll do our best. Thank you for your feedback, it is helpful.

digitaldruidgames343 days ago

no worries, I think the story would benefit from it if you take a bit longer to develop a coherent flow. keep it up!

digitaldruidgames289 days ago

How is the progress coming along?

XY Visual Novels283 days ago(+2)

Still working on it, should be soon but can't give an exact date.

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digitaldruidgames193 days ago

:-)

digitaldruidgames134 days ago

How are things looking now? :